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What do you think of these lyrics?

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July 19, 2019 / By Duane
Question: Copyright 2008 “This is not a threat it’s a promise” that’s what they tell me, I wonder if they’re joking, they say “Just wait and see”. I was too scared to say anymore, They made me question.. on what my heart beats for I knew it wasn’t a good impression, but I’m waiting to show, My biggest confession You can take that fake apology and shove it right up your ***, I’m sick and tired of you telling me All the things I wanna hear, I hate how this has turned out, But its not my fault it became this way, I see it in your eyes, You don’t know where this came from, but the happiness was a disguise, At the time I was just to dumb to show my feelings You can take that fake apology and shove it right up your ***, I’m sick and tired of you telling me All the things I wanna hear, I hate how this has turned out, But its not my fault it became this way, continued in next note.... But I’m not scared anymore I never will again question what my heart beats for I never did show my expression, but now that I’ve shown my biggest confession You can take that fake apology and shove it right up your ***, I’m sick and tired of you telling me All the things I wanna hear, I hate how this has turned out, But its not my fault it became this way, Yes I am a song writer. i wrote this one this morning. Also..i have to ittle yet..I am open to suggestions Aswell if you have any song topics I would be more than happy to write about them
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Britton Britton | 4 days ago
they're awesome. i'm really critical of lyrics but yours r really good. and they'd probably sound a lot better with the music. im hoping there'll be some electric guitar... =)
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Britton Originally Answered: What do you think of these lyrics?
i really love the lyrics. it'd be easier to imagine the song if i knew what genre it was but the way everything is worded is really awesome. however the lines: And this girl is also fictional, but damn it's so original,it seems im meeting one girl with a diff-rent, smile. dont really fit the rest of the song and they kind of break the mood. also the first line says its about a girl and a boy but it never says what happened in there relationship. it just kindof talks about how horrible the girl is. but i still love the song! hope this helped!
Britton Originally Answered: What do you think of these lyrics?
yes, it's about the evil of man. besides, i highly doubt that the devil had anything to do with the death of jesus, the 100 years war, the russian revolution, the blitzkrieg in world war 2, either kennedy assassinations, or the people killed on the hippie trail. so it must all have been man's doing. it's a cool history lesson though.
Britton Originally Answered: What do you think of these lyrics?
the lyrics are nice but the theme does not make sense - it's unusual for a slut to break any hearts - the dude in this song is quite dysfunctional.

Britton Originally Answered: What do you think about these lyrics?
good. i give it an 8. I won't give it more because it is not that original.If you could provide an original sound though, then you'd make the difference ;) do you play any m.instruments? Verse 2 may (just my thought) need some more work, I mean, I am sure you can express them better. Overall, I would CERTAINLY listen to it. Answer mine too! http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AmM3KFEYlqjv.uqmy8esS4Xsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20081118121645AA41TMc Please be sincere! :)
Britton Originally Answered: What do you think about these lyrics?
Wow, those were REALLY good!! I liked them alot dude, pretty amazing! Did u make those yourself? Oh and just a lil thing, u might want 2 add some music in them or make them longer, just a thought.
Britton Originally Answered: What do you think about these lyrics?
"That I'm the man for you, do anything I can for you Listen to your problems and solve 'em, you know I stand for you" I like that line a lot...rhymes end w/the same words but throw in "man, can, and stand", would sound pretty cool...reminds me of "satisfy you" by diddy and r.kelly a while ago... The rest of it is ok but looks like you force rhymes in certain parts and I dont really like the flow.

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