Topic: Which sentence 'SOUNDS BETTER'.? SENTENCE 1 or 2.?
July 20, 2019 / By Allycia Question:
Hi. I am thinking of including either sentence 1 or 2 in a law personal statement. Please suggest which sentence sounds better. Thanks.
"In the Eastern European Society, I have learned to appreciate the unique and diverse cultures within Europe."
"The Eastern European Society has given me a greater level of appreciation towards the cultural diversity in Europe."