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Help me with my essay plzzzzzzz. there is fast food involed?

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June 16, 2019 / By Ascelina
Question: im doin an informational essay about the fast food industry and i need a better introduction this is what i have so far... It is a multi-million dollar industry. 1 out of every 8 people have or will work for it and it is one of the major cause of the obesity in the US and Canada. It is the fast food industry. Most people all have stepped foot in a fast food restaurant, millions of people do so each day. But how much do we know about this industry? How did this industry change from food stands on the street to a multi-million dollar industry? To answer these questions, various factors of this industry will have to be explored. Its background and history, popularity, and the issues faced with it. so yea, the three main ideas of the body is 1. history of fast food 2. its popularity 3. health issues plz help me, edit my introduction or change the whole thing *remember, best one gets 10 points the sentences in quotes r the ones i think i need to work on, especially the hookline "It is a multi-million dollar industry.? 1 out of every 8 people have or will work for it and it is one of the major cause of the obesity in the US and Canada. It is the fast food industry. Most people all have stepped foot in a fast food restaurant, millions of people do so each day. But how much do we know about this industry? "How did this industry change from food stands on the street to a multi-million dollar industry?" To answer these questions, various factors of this industry will have to be explored. Its background and history, popularity, and the issues faced with it.
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Zefania Zefania | 6 days ago
I like what you have! I'll edit it a bit for you... The fast food industry is a multi-million dollar business. One out of every eight people currently work or have worked in fast food. It is one of the major causes of obesity in the US and Canada. Most people all have stepped foot in a fast food restaurant; millions of people do so each day. But how much is known about this industry? How did this industry change from food stands on the street to a multi-million dollar corporate machine? To answer these questions, various factors will have to be explored. This will include its early beginnigs and history, popularity, and the controversies associated with it today. The fast food industry is not only big busines, but is also a pop icon, and is synonymous with the American lifestyle. That is what I came up with. I just took your words and made it less redundant. I also took the word "we" out of it (your essay should only be written in the 3rd person) and I spelled out the numbers. "one" looks more professional than "1." Have fun with it! Hope I was of help. I can't sleep and should be doing my own hoemwork!!
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Zefania Originally Answered: Where can a 16 year old get a job without being fast food. Any good places i can apply for besides fast food?
OK....do some preparatory research: If you want to work in a departments store, make a list of all the stores in your area. Then go on the web and do a search for each one eg. Target, Kohls, ToysRUs and read their sections on jobs....how to apply etc....be sure to read what you will need to bring with you eg. any official papers. Line up some references - ask 3 people, preferably people who work and who know you...if they would be willing to be references for you because you are applying for a job. It helps to have both men and women in this list. Be sure you know their 'job title' and place of employment. Get their name, address, phone number.- type the information for the 3 of them on a piece of paper and bring it with you when you go to apply for the job. Go to the stores and ask at the service counter how and where to apply for a position. If you do not want to work in a department store - you can do the same sort of thing in local stores. Example. The other day I was in the local deli when a young woman came in and said, do you have need of any workers? I am looking for a job. I Will work hard and would be available to fit your schedule. The woman asked her a few questions...asked for her name and address and phone [the young woman had that typed out on a card]. Owner took the card....young woman said that she would really like to work there and would be glad to do a 'trial' so the owner could be sure that she fit the job. The other day I went in and there was a new young woman taking my order. Nice. Good luck...remember the more you know about a company, the more they will believe you really want to work there...
Zefania Originally Answered: Where can a 16 year old get a job without being fast food. Any good places i can apply for besides fast food?
Work at a restaurant as a host/hostess or a busser. It's decent money and when you turn 18 you have experience that could get you a job as a server, which is easy if you're outgoing and you can make a lot more money than most jobs you can get at 18.

Siward Siward
Your questions at the end do tell the reader what you're going to be talking about, but your introduction really should be something that grabs the reader's attention and flows smoothly. I took your main ideas and reorganized them: One out of every eight people have worked for or will work for the multi-million dollar industry that is the major cause of obesity in the United States and Canada. Millions of people support it with their consumer dollars every day. What is this industry that went from individual street vendors to the globalized brands everyone recognizes today? It is the fast food industry.
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Opher Opher
Fast Food has been the basis of the American culture since it was introduced to us. We have slowly started relying on these restaurants since they produce us with good food, fast, but they also provide us with many health issues, poor working conditions, yet no way to end the addiction.
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Opher Originally Answered: What do you think of my fast food essay?
Just start by supporting your topic - FAST FOOD RESTAURANTS TARGETING THE POOR - give some real life examples, or create some believable stories that will support your thesis. Thats what writing is all about, you have to be creative. Google some statistics on your thesis to support your story. You'll be good to go. Once you start writing, in no time you'll be done.

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